Shortlisted Entries
Poetry
These shortlisted entries have gone forward to the final judging panel, with the winning entry to be announced shortly. You can read their works below, and find out more about the shortlisted entrants at the bottom of the page.
These shortlists were picked from a total of around 2,500 poems submitted to the King Lear Prizes, and the judging team selected these shortlists in their respective categories based on the King Lear Prizes rules.
Poetry - Beginner
Final Flight
By Margaret Bending
My Sister’s Wig
By Kathryn Castle
Hands
By Libby Jones
Granny’s Camel
By Pamela McInally
Cancer Flower
By Denise Rivers
Close To The Edge
By Chris White
Poetry - Experienced Amateur
Fig Tree
By Martyn Barlow
Just The Same
By Heather Cook
Dorothy’s Ode
By Terry Dammery
The Vortex
By Judith Drazin
The Cutting Room
By Peter Lindley
Between Worlds
By Richard Williams (writing as Will Ingrams)
Highly Commended Entries
Poetry
In addition to our shortlisted entrants, our judging team was particularly impressed with the following Highly Commended works, chosen from thousands of works in the poetry category.
Poetry - Beginner
Loneliness - John Ackerley
Africa Never Leaves You - Edward Bacon
My Mum - Sheila Barclay
A Walk on Burry Port Beach - Lynne Bebb
Friendship - Margaret Bending
1978-2001 - Barbara Best
Chambol Calling - Piers Bilston
Roots - Jo Bland
Lessons - Moya Boyd
Palm Polishers - Naomi Burgess
Without You - Sheila Burns
Through My Open Door - Mike Carter
Love and Variations - Ray Charman
Stillbirth - J. Pamela Cherrington
The Problem with History - Michael Cleaver
Grief - Jessica Corbyn
When The People Sang - Pip Coyne
Dolmens - Rosemary Dixon
Death of Innocence - Jean Eason
The Caretaker's Cat - Leon Edwards
The Dig - Jenny Foster
Witches - Steve Freeman
Windborne Resident - Goodbye - Roger Garrett
Wake - Nicola Grove
Long Forgotten - Eric Harvey
Murmuration - Sarah Hawkins
Three Stops - Annie Higgs
Walking with Mr Fox - Linda James
The Disappearing Mind - Carolyn Kokta
Boxing With My Dad - Peter Larner
Painters Forstall - Alexandra Le Rossignol
The Striving - Martin Leaver
After the Storm - Hazel Lintott
Sea Dreams - Celia McClure
The Things We Say - Sarah Miller
Wounded - John Miller
My Father John Dewar Monteith - James Monteith
Co-op Conversation - Polly Palmer
After The Diagnosis - Jake Piper
Behind Closed Doors - Rob Roberts
Washdays and Vaseline - Krysia Sosna
Never Talk to Strangers - Vronni Ward
Sonnet to My Daughter’s Garden - Sylvia Wilson
Poetry - Experienced Amateur
Comma - Phillip Barling
All Souls Day - Alex Barr
Once - Mishi Bellamy
Autumn Elegy - Keith Bolton
An Artist I Once Knew - Kathryn Booth
My Chekhov - Mo Browne
Sweet Revenge - Linda Burnett
Fountain Of Youth - Sandra Mary Chambers
What Thomas Cromwell had to say at the National Portrait Gallery - Tina Cole
White Afternoon - Giles Cole
Wise Men - Christopher Collier
John Wonncott's Portrait of his Mother - Naomi Collyer
When Birds Stop Singing - Heather Cook
Coastal Village April 2020 - Cherrill Copperwheat
The Rebel - Ann Craig
The Journey - John Davies
You’re Slipping Into Your Jeans - Roger Elkin
intimations of mortality - Elizabeth Fenney
On the Long Road Back - Sue Gerrard
Greenhouse 1959 - Christine Griffin
Desperate Measures - Christine Gunning
I Ran Once - Rosemary Harle
Different Endings - Kay Hathway
Table Tennis is the Sport of Choice for Older People - Marion Hobday
Changeable Weather - Ruth Howes
Only A Chair - Robert Hume
Screensaver - Flloyd Kennedy
Returning to the Island - Sue Knott
Peeping At Neighbours - Carol Lange
Our Mothers Said - Angela Langfield
Beaumont Hamel - Kevin Lawry
In A Fantasy World - Patricia Leighton
ReCreation - Lewis Lev
The Steps of No. 93 - Peter Lindley
Ruined Heart - George Littlejohn
The Tether - Jim Loft
Blue Sequins off Japan - Carole Martin
Remembering - Jane McDowall
Love - Maggie McLean
Remember Where You’re From - Philip McNulty
Renascence - Dennis Meek
I’ve Got A Secret - Sue Mitchell
Southend Pier Train - Mary Mullett
Symphony of Encounters - Carolyn O’Connell
Touchstone - Martin Olsson
Sharp Scratch - Charles Owen
For The Love Of P’s - Dianne Preston
A Rum Do! - Colin Pritchard
Dead Letters - Christopher Rawson-Tetley
beating, reaching, running - Arthur Richardson
Run Around The Hill - Ann Seed
Three Views Around My Mother - Madeleine Sewter
Sunrise over Morecambe Bay from my kitchen window - Hazel Smith
Sea Glass - Eleanor Smith
I Am Spider - Elizabeth Soule
Death Rehearsal - Susanne Spencer
Sent With Love - Ronnie Steele
the bliss wave - Michael Steward
Gone Piano - Danny Strike
Piano Lessons - Lynda Tavakoli
Coding my knitting out of Lockdown - Marylyn Towers
Uncle - Penelope Turton
Twenty Years in Haiku - Peggy Verrall
Lame Duck - Jim Waite
Our Lost Long-ago - Lindsay Walter
The Coming of Third Age - June Webster
Albert - Terry Wing
Touchstone - Ann Worrall
Meet Our Shortlisted Entrants
Poetry - Beginner
Margaret Bending
Tell us a bit about where you live?
I live at Fewston, near Harrogate in North Yorkshire.
Why did you enter the King Lear Prizes?
I only started writing in the last couple of years, and, whilst enjoying it enormously, I find it hard to write without some impetus. Entering King Lear Prizes gave me the motivation to try and produce a suitable poem or piece of prose.
What inspired your work?
Over the last year of lockdowns and restrictions, I have longed for the freedom to go to the sea again, and yet the devastating effects of the pandemic brought the uneasy thought that it may never happen. This was the inspiration for 'Final Flight'.
Kathryn Castle
Libby Jones
Tell us a bit about where you live?
I live in Twickenham and have lived in the Richmond/Twickenham area since 1984 previously spending 24 years in Lebanon and Cyprus. I went to Lebanon to teach, and got married and gave birth to 3 daughters there. Back in England I took a BA and MA in Fine Art and Printmaking and now I am an artist and printmaker and, until recently, taught printmaking.
Why did you enter the King Lear Prizes?
I have always written poetry and in my secondary school days often had work in the school magazine. However I had never thought of getting my work published. When I saw the King Lear Prize notification on Instagram I thought it would be interesting to apply for something other than Art opportunities.
What inspired your work?
The Pandemic made me realise that, in my generation, I am the only surviving immediate family member facing this situation. Thinking about my parents, siblings and husband I pondered about a good way to remember them. In bed one morning I looked at my hands and the inspiration came.
Pamela McInally
Tell us a bit about where you live?
I live in Bonsall, a village near Matlock in the Peak District.
Why did you enter the King Lear Prizes?
It popped up on Facebook and I'd just written Granny's Camel so I thought, why not! The main appeal was the age group.
What inspired your work?
I wrote a few poems for my children when they were little and my grandson wanted me to write some for him. He suggested Camel as a subject, and, having been to Kazakhstan and seen Bactrian camels in the steppe, this became the theme!
Denise Rivers
Tell us a bit about where you live?
I live in a town called Forres, in the North East of Scotland. I am very near the Moray Firth and I take great pleasure in walking on the dunes, listening to the mournful cries of the seals.
Why did you enter the King Lear Prizes?
I entered the King Lear Prizes to try to invest myself with more confidence in my writing! I am starting a Creative Writing Course in October and I feel it is now or never.
What inspired your work?
I have now had cancer four times over the last twenty years. I admire the tenacity of these cancers to keep growing within me and my body's tenacity in holding its ground. I wanted to explore this complicated relationship. The cancer as a flower or errant growth seemed a good metaphor.
Chris White
Tell us a bit about where you live?
I live in Lichfield, a cathedral city in Staffordshire.
Why did you enter the King Lear Prizes?
I entered the King Lear Prizes Competition because as an occasional writer of poetry (although unpublished) the prospect of a competition focuses the mind and imagination with a tangible goal in sight and it gives me the opportunity to submit my work to the judgment of others.
What inspired your work?
My work was triggered by the strange and unforeseen circumstances we are all living through and the feelings of melancholia and memory that this situation stirred in my mind. I have always been deeply inspired by Eliot’s 'Waste Land’ and metaphors of struggle, love and resistance. Poetry seems to be the fine art of saying the unsayable.
Poetry - Experienced Amateur
Martyn Barlow
Heather Cook
Tell us a bit about where you live?
I have lived in Woking, Surrey for over 40 years, but grew up in south-east London. Woking suits me. It's convenient and undemanding and leaves plenty of room for me to think my thoughts while walking on the surrounding commonland.
Why did you enter the King Lear Prizes?
I've always written poetry and have been a member of Woking Writers' Circle for several years. I was delighted to hear about a competition for older people; I'm very supportive of young writers, but those of us who have been around for a while still have things to say.
What inspired your work?
The realisation as I embarked on a new relationship that although the face in the mirror was definitely not that of a 21-year old, the emotional turmoil was no different from that I'd experienced in my youth. I might be old, but don't anybody accuse me of being sensible!
Terry Dammery
Tell us a bit about where you live?
I live in the English Peak District in a house that’s in the clouds and where the winters are long and the snow deep – a good place for writing poetry, a good place anyway and I am lucky. My family, particularly my dog YoYo, think so too.
Why did you enter the King Lear Prizes?
I’m eighty years old and have, at a guess, around eight hundred or more poems doing nothing on my hard drive – it’s the long winters. So, it was good to have the opportunity to put a recent ‘lockdown’ one out there. Also, given that the King Lear Prizes are for the seniors, it was an opportunity to show that many of us oldies are sufficiently blessed and willing to show what we could all do, given the chance. Thank you for that. Besides, by the time we are eighty there is a lot to write about.
What inspired your work?
I spent my early years in a wartime orphanage and the ‘Dorothy’ of the poem gave me a home in the years after peace was declared. It was a house by the sea which she shared with her brother. She was sixty and she, quite literally, showed me the poetry there is in life. One of her own favourite poems, she had many, was the Intimations Ode and so it seemed apposite that I should write one for her – something positive when the death count was rising from Covid.
Judith Drazin
Peter Lindley
Richard Williams
Tell us a bit about where you live?
I live in Suffolk, not far from the Norfolk border, near the small town of Eye, where I try to keep local wildlife from ravaging the fruit and vegetables. Our three grandchildren live next door, so we also help with the school run.
Why did you enter the King Lear Prizes?
A competition for those of advancing years seemed too good to ignore; at sixty-nine I am suitably qualified. I entered several of my poems and a ‘real story’ for the King Lear Prizes, hoping for a wider readership, and to put my work to the test.
What inspired your work?
Everyday incidents and serendipitous phrases often inspire my poems. ‘Between Worlds’ sprang from headlines of space exploration and a reflection on the gulf between the worlds of work and home.